This parti also needs work, its no so much a coconut shell or pearly as perhaps a cave with light piercing through it looking at the sections. again look at examples in nature. Also relook at your hierarchy and how your using colours which is confusing your pitch. I feel like you have missed out on diagramming the windows, street activity, and then the 4 segments etc. Well done otherwise.
This parti also needs work, its no so much a coconut shell or pearly as perhaps a cave with light piercing through it looking at the sections. again look at examples in nature. Also relook at your hierarchy and how your using colours which is confusing your pitch. I feel like you have missed out on diagramming the windows, street activity, and then the 4 segments etc. Well done otherwise.
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